Teacher Note - ‘UNASSISTED’ ASTTLE WRITING
The children write for a total of 40 minutes. Within that timeframe they have to plan their writing (a brainstorm) write, edit and re-craft their work. They are not allowed to use dictionaries or word cards. The students completed their writing on paper but have typed it out for their blogs.
WALT write a creative narrative story!
24.11.21
Once upon a time there were two best friends named Jordyn and Casey. They were in a classroom they were working very very hard then Jordyn had to go to the toilet so she walked to the bathroom just as she got to the bathroom she wondered in but suddenly she heard a whisper a whisper quieter then a mouse so she ran as fast as she could to get out but then a barricade came zooming over her and then BOOM! she was stuck in there. The teacher and Casey were worried so Casey went to go check on her but suddenly someone pushed her in so now they were both trapped after a couple of hours the teacher finally came to get us we rushed out to get our drink bottles and lunch boxes we ate an ate till we finally finished. After that we started to feel sick so someone took us to the doctors when we got there we found out it was a haunted hospital but Jordyn remembered that Hunter was the one who trapped us so Jordyn and Casey raced out and zoomed back to school. Now they were safe and they all felt scared and terrified but Jordyn knew that they were safe. So on they lived happily ever after!
